Shaun Cronick

Feelings

A feeling of satisfaction,
After having a meal to eat.
A feeling of relaxation,
When you put up your feet.

A feeling of thankfulness,
For the words of poet friends.
A feeling of elation,
Reading fine poems from their pens.

A feeling of rejuvenation,
After a long hot bath.
A feeling of appreciation,
When making friends laugh.

A feeling of pride,
For a hard task completed.
A feeling of elation,
After a bully is defeated.

A feeling of relief,
When a petrol stations sighted.
A feeling of wonder,
When a child is reunited.

A feeling of hope,
When you give to the poor.
A feeling of gratitude,
When saved by your saviour.

A feeling of devastation,
After a loved one has sadly passed.
A feeling of annoyance,
When rainy weather wasn't forecast.

A feeling of irritation,
When the words won't come to you.
A feeling of destitution,
As you struggle to make do.

A feeling of helplessness,
Through life's toils we all plod.
A final feeling of one,
When we're all at peace with God.

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2020
Poem Edited: Monday, September 21, 2020

Form: Stanza


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

And many, many thanks to Lodigiana Poetess for her most kind comment...' A feeling of thankfulness for the words of poet friends.
Which is now added in to make the second stanza and also makes a huge poetic difference.
Thank you Lodigiana and remain poetry enriched.

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Comments about Feelings by Shaun Cronick

  • Lodigiana PoetessLodigiana Poetess (9/21/2020 6:07:00 AM)

    if I might add...'A feeling of Thankfulness for the words of Poet friends'
    So well put Shaun and a wonderful read! Thank you for sharing this Lodigiana x

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  • Dominic WindramDominic Windram (9/21/2020 2:07:00 AM)

    Nice sentiments expressed here Shaun. I really like your use of anaphora at the beginning of each stanza....works a treat! It's often the simple things in life that make it work living. It's taken me many years to work that out. It's definitely a filled with positive feelings inspired five from me!

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/21/2020 12:28:00 AM)

    A beautifully penned poem.
    Truly exceptional....5 stars +++

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