Feelings Are A Lie Poem by thomas coltrin

Feelings Are A Lie

Rating: 5.0


I don’t know I never knew
What u told me and what I had to do
What u showed me and what I showed u
What was fake or what was true

I know the feeling u had were kind of real
The problem was they weren’t for me to believe
The other problem was that u lied
U told me that I don’t have to try
& it was because u told me three words
& I believed u all along
And now those three words that u told
Are more then what they have been gone

Now u sit in the arms of that guy
Ur a bit more happier then I had thought
Oh wait…..ur miserable in every way im not
I see ur pain and and right through mine to
Our feeling for each other were never kind of true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 June 2009

You said everything of it precisely in the last line, Thomas...good poem reflecting on the sober side of a relation that didn't last long...thanks...10

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Rachel Blank 06 March 2009

I like this poem.... especially the first stanza- very good with the contrasting ideas.

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Akram Saqib 24 February 2009

good but complex poem

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