thomas coltrin

Rookie (march 14 1991 / russia....kolasin)

I Love You (Meghan) This Hurt To Write - Poem by thomas coltrin

A thought or too for those who knew
About the world after you
Of what you did to their poor hearts
And souls destroyed with your cruel words

You got your thrill you played the games
You made the rules in empty plains
Destroying blood in every vain
Getting pleasure out of pain

I see your smile everyday
Too bad it’s not for me to say
Three words that I feel everyday
Three words that now don’t mean a thing

Love is death and death is you
its pain stains like a black tattoo
those memories come back again
and binding me in ropes of pain

i will always love you meghan, no matter what happens, i just need you to understand that, it just hurt, after everything after all, that its over now...


Comments about I Love You (Meghan) This Hurt To Write by thomas coltrin

  • (4/10/2010 1:02:00 PM)


    this mad me a lil sad: (but i see the emotion behind it. its sad: (and a good wright. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/10/2010 7:40:00 AM)


    Poem of sadness written from the heart.... youth is the tool to gain love again the path of life is long..patience.. thanks for the read..the magic carpet will come
    regards
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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (4/9/2010 7:46:00 PM)


    Love is death and death is you
    its pain stains like a black tattoo
    those memories come back again
    and binding me in ropes of pain

    ......
    we need some pain-killer in this circum. Better, passion should be converted in 'don't love' attitude OR some other way out which findings are highly the field of writing another poem.
    Enjoyed your writing, write more....LIVE LONG
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  • (4/9/2010 2:43:00 PM)


    very sad, but well wrriten good job (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2010 11:56:00 AM)


    very emotional, very sad too. (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2010 6:57:00 AM)


    awwwsss...that made me kinda sad: /
    but i love its emotion & how u wrote it (:
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  • (4/9/2010 1:45:00 AM)


    free flow of emotions.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 9, 2010



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