Monday, June 8, 2015

Fight With Fear Comments

Rating: 4.5

Blue heaven, Blue sky, Blue quite sea
Let me dive in, Oh! Fear let me go deep
Leave my hand, Don't hold me so tight
Go away you coward Let me enjoy the flight
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Masuma Mirza
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Chinedu Dike 09 June 2015

Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows, a shadow has no substance, it's usually only a magnified reflection of something small. That's why on standing up to fear, we often find it inconsequential. I like the articulation of the poem and the insight. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 08 June 2015

Yes, fear should at best be used to inspire, not retreat Thanks for sharing, Masuma Peace

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