Rating: 4.8

If you stop fighting, you are weak.
If you stop fighting, you are giving up.
If you stop fighting, then you are not a fighter.

Fight, fight, fight.
Never give up.Even if all seems lost,
Never give up; keep on fighting.
Or you would be a coward.
For it is only in fighting, that you will acheive what you want.

Bethany M. 04 August 2008

wonderful poem. I think it has a true message in it.

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Jhun Blake 04 August 2008

Really nicley written Bell, it is saying the truth too. KEEP WERTITTING, you really are talented.

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Anna jonson 04 August 2008

aha i like it it's beautiful

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 17 November 2008

Beautiful poem, but to be seen in metaphysical persepctive. According to Lord Krishna, when He was teaching the great archer Arjuna before the start of Great war of Mahabharata (as described in greatest Poem, the sacred Gita) that our body is the battleground, On which everyday, the war between good and evil (senses) is fought! Who wins (the senses or the soul with discriminating mind) , ultimately decides weather 'we' as a person are winning the battle royale of life.

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Ryan Thompson 10 October 2008

hmmm... i can see what you mean but violence is never the awnser they say right..? i'm not one to judge this but it was good -ryan

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Kris Smith 07 August 2008

There are other ways to gain your achievements Intelligence is the sharpest sword of all I have seen what fighting does, the blood spilt and the damage done, the poem is sound and give you a 10 Chris

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Obed Akuma 06 August 2008

determination is the key that unlocks success, nice poem and very encouraging.

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Blue Eyes 05 August 2008

life is a fight that we should go through and we must do it bravely

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