Here I Come

Rating: 4.5

Here i come;
more courageous than ever,
more determined than ever,
more mature than ever.

Here i come;
more confident than ever,
more brave than ever,
ready to trample on difficulties.
Obstancles will realize iam not scared of them.
So iam a different person.
i don't know how come, but it feels good to be like that.
For being like that makes you to succeed and to be immune to the difficuties of life

M M 04 August 2008

An interesting point of view on a mind 'under construction', as we all are... Well done!

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Obed Akuma 04 August 2008

in life we have to resolve one thing, that is, 'how are we going to face life'. once that is done then no matter what happens we have the guts and strength to surmount every obstacle. nice reminder about our state in life. thanks keep it up.

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Javier Falcon 03 August 2008

I think that without the fears, difficulties and problems, life wouldn't be life, good write anyhow...

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Bethany M. 03 August 2008

very nicely written, it has a true stron meaning to it! :)

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Jilted Butterfly 03 August 2008

I love this..... I don't know why but I have an image of big boots, ready to trample down any problems in the way!

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Alandra Moreira 30 July 2009

Spoken truth... nowadays you have to be more of every aspect of you character in order to immune to everyday difficulties since the difficulties seem to ahve gotten even more difficult lately. Good Job! !

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 17 November 2008

Wow, so beautiful, brings smile on readers face. How strong, how lively. Well written Blessing!

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Little Hatila ;) 06 October 2008

wow....i see you are so optimistic in this sweet poem...keep going lovely girl Hataw

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Jhun Blake 04 August 2008

Really really good poem. It shows your determination to never give up in life. Good job.

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Kris Smith 04 August 2008

Stay strong and stay positive Paris 9

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