Feelings Poem by blessing nanier

Feelings

Rating: 4.8


How do i feel when iam alone?
How do i feel when iam sad?
How do i feel when iam watched day and night?
How do i feel when i have friends who care theless about my eres?
How do i feel when i have love always by my side?
Yes, i have feelings because iam a human being.
There's no shame about it.
There is nothing to be said about it.
So why do they tend me weak because i cry?
So why do they say iam mad when i dance around?
So why do they say i should be ashamed because iam shy?
What i forget is poeple will always speak no matter what happens

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rohit sapra 09 August 2008

This poem talks about feelings which is nice as human beings have feelings which are to be respected since feelings are what this world stands upon. Best way to deal with things is by being the real you which is with feelings.

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 August 2008

The only question about feelings is their honesty. Are the feelings honest and coming from you, or are they derived from something that does not come from you. If they are derived feelings from somewhere else, you must investigate their origin and determine their substance. Then you either keep them or discard them as the case may be. GW62

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Anna jonson 24 September 2009

true true true true one million times 10 you're truly truly a good poet dearest

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Alandra Moreira 30 July 2009

'In life theres only one garentee... your feet won't always be on the groun cause we ALL fall down...'- Diamond Rio Yea people who are like that shouldn't be, because they do it to and who knows, they may do it more so than they think. We all have to go through things we all feel things differently emotional critique shouldn't exist. Why are you crying? You may not even know. Obviously if your dancing your happy... hey thats a good thing I'll go dancin in the rain anytime! Now call me crazy...

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 17 November 2008

This is very positive poem! It reminds us of all the pain which a human, subjected to all the taunts go through; however, a strong and courageous human comes out of these rumblings by sheer grit! This is especially important for teenagers! However, all humans are not so strong, and some are very sentimental, whom we should nurture and support. Great write Blessing!

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Ryan Thompson 10 October 2008

this is an interesting poem.. it makes me think about the humen factors and life nice :) -ryan

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Bethany M. 23 August 2008

worful poem, it hits sortof the same area as your poem 'think'. Only this poem hits on feelings more than thought. And people feel that it is right to judge people by what they feel or what their actions are it's part of being human, feelings are powerful as well as thought not as powerful but they are very powerful if you control someones feelings you control in a sense of speaking them. great poem. very well written

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