Fur like white clouds
Make me feel so proud
Carrying all the rains
Wash away the pain.
Rainbow also appears
Makes all the doubts – clear.
Sun is so bright and glowing
Adrenalin keeps flowing.
Cool breeze soothens me
Dark thoughts are set free.
31/03/08
Awesome, Sarojini Naidu, simply awesome. What purity of thought and neatness you display. Amazes me no end. Great work. Keep it up. Another 100000000.10 is too less for this brilliance.
This seems to be a supreme solace Blooming with nature's shelter A clear indication of Breathing Space. Nice one.
Thats what I wanted from your pen.Here comes a really good piece of work.Very good.
Again good one. U prove 2 b a veteran. Keep it up. By the way- r u a biologist?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a clear 'rain bow sky'...clear 'no pain' mind...clear image you create. good work deepti! 10