Deepti Agarwal


Finally - Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Fur like white clouds
Make me feel so proud
Carrying all the rains
Wash away the pain.
Rainbow also appears
Makes all the doubts – clear.
Sun is so bright and glowing
Adrenalin keeps flowing.
Cool breeze soothens me
Dark thoughts are set free.

31/03/08


Comments about Finally by Deepti Agarwal

  • (6/11/2008 10:09:00 PM)


    a clear 'rain bow sky'...clear 'no pain' mind...clear image you create.
    good work deepti! 10
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  • (6/6/2008 9:53:00 AM)


    Awesome, Sarojini Naidu, simply awesome. What purity of thought and neatness you display. Amazes me no end. Great work. Keep it up. Another 100000000.10 is too less for this brilliance. (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (5/10/2008 10:37:00 AM)


    This seems to be a supreme solace
    Blooming with nature's shelter
    A clear indication of
    Breathing Space.

    Nice one.
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  • (4/2/2008 7:19:00 AM)


    Thats what I wanted from your pen.Here comes a really good piece of work.Very good. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2008 5:26:00 AM)


    Again good one. U prove 2 b a veteran. Keep it up. By the way- r u a biologist? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 12, 2008


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