Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Fine Without You - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“I am fine without you”
I did not attempt to woo
It came all of sudden
I did not think for it even

I must definitely think
Must go deep but not to sink
Should try for honest relation
Try for real without any passion

What can I say in the absence?
Must think and realize its true essence
After al it is not joke but in real sense
Lead s to a state of feeling little tense

Well, good humour and exchange pave the way
At least you have some respite and say
Clear words and promises come to the rescue
No regret later on or worthless try to sue

Friendship may cover new area for breeding
No hollow promises but certain pledges for feeding
Making bonds for worth while duration
Can’t find and parallel or equation

It is worth to explore and find suitable mate
Should not leave it merely to cruel fate
May be its realization will be little late
We must be little reasonable and considerate

You can’t be fine without her
No other partner may prove better
Let this work out as permanent refuge
You have no chance to say no or refuse

We may joke and exchange bitter words
Should not miss and always look forward
Relations are built only on good will
Must be bonded and shouldn’t try to kill

After all it is worthy and fine elevation
Everybody has experienced it with fine observation
Nobody should try to subvert or lead to negation
Must accept it without any hesitation


Comments about Fine Without You by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (1/10/2010 7:09:00 PM)


    your work awes me... (Report) Reply

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  • (12/30/2009 11:18:00 AM)


    Should not miss and always look forward

    excellent philosophical poem 10/10
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/29/2009 9:41:00 PM)


    very well penned! ........ (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2009 6:03:00 AM)


    SO NICE PIECE OFWRITING (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 12:11:00 AM)


    you're the real poet dear..only an hour and u made already lines for '' fine without you''...well, without you, i am not fine...the poem is closely related to truthfulness..our jokes are normally part of our friendship..laughters are all we want to express...and, the thought is so nice...

    to the author...i like the presentation....
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 1, 2011


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