Fine Without You Poem by Tiffany Wolf

Fine Without You

Rating: 5.0


What have I done,
Without you?
Let me see.....
I watched a candle burn out,
I watched the grass grow,
And the paint on the wall dry.
What else can I do,
But watch our love,
Pass me by.
Everything I knew or have known,
Everyhting's been taken away,
All the love and pain I have shown.
I let people,
Critique,
And criticize.
While I sit,
Not listen,
And fantasize.
Fantasize about....
Our used-to-be love,
Romance,
And bliss.
About sweet things you said,
Did,
And that loving sweet kiss.
What else should I do?
Wait for you,
Ask for you to stay,
What is it that you want?
Well, now I'm moving on,
Gonna have fun,
And now my memory,
In your mind and for years it will haunt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 17 April 2009

You write very well you will go very far you keep writeing...iip..thanks you

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Ken E Hall 12 April 2009

The title says it all thats how it should be when a love moves on.. nice read, Sir Lancelot could be just around the corner regards

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Eyan Desir 11 April 2009

AWWW Well I feel sorry For this guy that lost you HE lost A great talent HIS lost move on little lady 10+

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thought you couldn't od without me.. now what is this ia m hearing? ? lol.. nice write my friend....

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hmmm how did I come across this poem? ...let's see..... sht... idk... but it was worth stopping to read... nicely done... ps. i like how it rhymes.. but not every line... thats genious of you :) really.... keep it up.

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