Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

Finishing Touch - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

you could be the finishing touch
the varnish on the newly sanded wood
to give me my shine in my steps and in my smile
the person who has my arm hooked around her back
but sometimes I release it for just a few seconds
so that I can twirl your body and admire every inch
as it spins around me like a moon in orbit
as we dance with each other
like Fred Astaire and Ginger Rodgers
we are made for each other
our chemistry is so hot
it doesn't need a bunson burner to boil it over
we could make such sweet potions


Comments about Finishing Touch by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • john tiong chunghoo (1/9/2006 4:31:00 AM)


    yes, cokbod it is so true. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/8/2006 1:17:00 PM)


    This is so romantic Cokbod! I love the thought of her being your varnish to finish you off! What a great image.........since varnish brings out the beauty so clearly in wood. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 2, 2008


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