Fire Poem by Khadim Hussain

Fire

Rating: 5.0


Water calms fire
But when lovers shed tears
The Fire rages.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 22 June 2007

that's because the heart is an organ of fire. Missing a count in the second line: 6 when it should be 7. best care.

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Khadim Hussain

Khadim Hussain

Lunger Pur Baly, Jhellum, Pakistan
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