Fluffy Dreams Poem by David Harris

Fluffy Dreams

Rating: 4.8


In fluffy dreams,
I sail across the rhythmic motions
of the erotic sea
to where my lover lay.
The sensuous pleasures there
explode within my dreams
as mountain peaks crumble
and crash down into the sea.
I float in loves bubble
exhilarated by the chasmic rupture
into which I fall
and heaven is just a moment away
within my lovers call.


24 October 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

There's some really thrilling words in here, even if the title is Fluffy Dreams- and David, don't worry- I would never set your fluffy poem on fire with my Harley-Davidson lighter..however, I admit your poem might have played a small part as ignition of my poem..(smile)

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Carol Gall 24 October 2009

fluffy is right a beautiful write words used are lovely 10

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Tsira Goge 24 October 2009

David, -Good the verse name, also sounds passionately..10... best wishes, Tsira

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