Font Color=darkvioletseasonal Haikus (School Assignment 9th) Poem by Jane Meyer

Font Color=darkvioletseasonal Haikus (School Assignment 9th)



Spring
The growth of new life
pushes free of hardened ground
potential greatness

Fall
Trees engulfed in flames
living fire slowly dieing
burning on the wind

Winter
Air floating crystals
covering land in white ice
life pausing, waiting

Summer
The sun beating down
encouraging us to live
enjoy nature’s prime

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
HaZeM PaKKaR 23 March 2010

I am so glad that you started with ''Spring''.. It really scatters ecstasy everywhere with ''the growth of new life''.. however, I like the 3-rd stanza the most.. I feel it describes my mood in ''Winter'', specially when you say: ''life pausing, waiting''.. Fall? ! Do I have any memories of ''fall''? ! Oh, yeah.. I lost my first tooth in fall (lol, Is that a good memory? ?) .. & when you ends it with ''Summer'', you promote me to '' enjoy nature’s prime ''.. let's see, it's only three months away. Thanks for making me live 365-day-long experience while reading this.

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