Font Color='#ff00ff''To My Friend April'/Font Poem by Geovanni Leaño

Font Color='#ff00ff''To My Friend April'/Font

Rating: 4.1



.....................It'sSoAmus.........'You Are My
................ingHowLittleThis........8th World
.............WorldIs, ThatTheWo.......Wonder...'
............rldLeftThisSpecialPlac.........-April F.
.............eForUsTwo, NowI'm
................LearningToCallY......ouM
....................yFriendAtLe.........ast, A
.........................ndHow.............FastI
.................BecameComfo.......rtable
..............too, NowEveryMor...ning
..........IWish..ToDropY..ouBy, A'
........Good.....Morning'......Tha
.........tCan.....MakeMeS
..........mileI....nside, And
............Eve...ryOnceInA
..............Wh.ileISometim
..................esSigh..., Won.....By:
.................dering......WhyA......Lex_Potent
................mIFee.......lingThi
................sWayI.......nside, I
...............sIt'Coz......IMissT
.................heFrie......ndIFo
.................undIn......You?
...........AndAllTh......oseHappy
.........MomentsH.......aveGoneSo
Fast, NowIWriteThisPoemForAGreatFriendLik
eYou, AndAlthoughWeBothKnowThatTimeRu
nsSoFast, TheMelodyWeHearWillAlwaysRema
in, JustLikeOurFriendship, WeWillAlwaysRemain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 24 April 2008

Very interesting style but difficult to read. Good idea anyway, keep posting.

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Wilfred Mellers 24 April 2008

I see that you have a unique style of writing. I did find it a bit hard to follow seeing that you put it in a shape of a person. I would have never thought of that. I like it. It is well written. I look forward to reading more of your poems

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Dipika P 24 April 2008

nice one an unusual style though...

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Garrett Sherrell 23 April 2008

very good poem. I like the way it's typed. Also, it's very pure.

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Desiree Whitamore 23 April 2008

thats so nice! keep writing!

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Emancipation Planz 25 June 2009

Geovanni... This is so Yay! .... Tis been ages since I visited your quirk on cleverness, aroha, Deana

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Ivor Hogg 19 August 2008

cleverly construcred concrete poetry I aplaud your ingenuity

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Ryan Camansa 14 July 2008

Waah! Swerte ni april friend kanya. Nice poem! keep it up!

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Sara Neame 01 May 2008

This is great. I love the way you have arranged the text. It does make it a bit difficult to read, but that doesn't matter. It helps the reader to concentrate on the words and the meaning. Well done!

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Howard Johnson 24 April 2008

Art work and words married, a excellent show of creativity, gave it a 10

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