Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 397,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Foolish Comments - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Foolish comments

Not sometimes
But always
You need to have some one
Who gets your work done?

He or she is inspirational master
And always after
Pointing out about what is right and wrong
I take it as silly song

But it has become practice
With no choice
As I run for no fun
The life has rightly begun

I make daily count
But found
She is much more than master
Real path provider

I shall always tease
And release
Some sort of foolish comments
But shall always see that they are sent

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 28, 2015



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