The fire can't warm my lonely heart
Or stem the pain I feel,
This bleak December afternoon
My wounds shall never heal,
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Like the way you dovetail your descriptives...and employ their merge with the complimenting text.Sound stanzaec construction...Solid crafting, indeed, Andrew! ~FjR~ .2008.
Terrific Andrew. I love the linking of the repeated last lines. wonderful read indeed. Excellent onace again. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A captivating write of love lost and footprints in the snow the sad reminder, lovely! ! *10* Thank you for sharing! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad
Brilliant! Andrew, i love it! such a way with words regards Bob