Sunday, April 20, 2008

For If To Me Her Love Belonged Comments

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For if to me her love belonged
I'd sing for joy this day,
And yet I know what're I try
It cannot be this way,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Alison Cassidy 02 May 2008

I love the way you've introduced the seasons into this melancholy piece. They beautifully mirror the emotional tapestry that you have woven to share your sorrow. Your words are sad, and yet there is a hint of optimism in the final stanza. Spring surely is coming. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 24 April 2008

A virtual hand upon the shoulder doesn't seem enough here my friend, so for now I simply say, , , I know that feeling Take care Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 21 April 2008

A captivating poem of a love and a broken heart, a very sad yet wonderful read! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

A cracking write which has all the components correctly fitted. Delightful to read this one, the flow was spot on. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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