For if to me her love belonged
I'd sing for joy this day,
And yet I know what're I try
It cannot be this way,
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A virtual hand upon the shoulder doesn't seem enough here my friend, so for now I simply say, , , I know that feeling Take care Love duncan X
A captivating poem of a love and a broken heart, a very sad yet wonderful read! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad
A cracking write which has all the components correctly fitted. Delightful to read this one, the flow was spot on. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
I love the way you've introduced the seasons into this melancholy piece. They beautifully mirror the emotional tapestry that you have woven to share your sorrow. Your words are sad, and yet there is a hint of optimism in the final stanza. Spring surely is coming. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥