Sylvia Frances Chan

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For My Sympathetic - Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

For my sympathetic
Thank YOU so much for your help
and attention,
you are so kind n cute like a whelp
don't mention

my greetings I send you always with peace
so happy am i with this i feel at my ease
you I adore, my sympathetic
do not be afraid I stay beneath the ethic

Oh no, it's burning in my belly
what do you think it is a butterfly, me?
no, my dear, it's under the attic
the attic of my belly, it's real hectic

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Form: Rhyme Royal or Rime Royale

Comments about For My Sympathetic by Sylvia Frances Chan

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/1/2017 2:03:00 AM)

    Cuteness of humanity is witnessed by love, affection, relationship, helping nature, sympathy and by other human and spiritual values. This is an amazing poem that carries philosophy and does aware a reader to have spirituality...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/19/2017 1:10:00 AM)

    aympathy, peace, feeling at ease, feeling of gratefullness. all are there in your poem dear poetess. thank you very much.......... making every experience spiritual is your strength in your poems.. thank you. tony (Report) Reply

    Kumarmani Mahakul Kumarmani Mahakul (8/1/2017 2:00:00 AM)

    I agree with you. Life becomes cheerful while we are spiritual. Spirituality gives us strength.

  • Pintu Mahakul (2/8/2017 5:05:00 AM)

    Very nice poem!
    Reading a poem of 2011 gives real joy here. Sympathetic mind realizes importance of help. This value of sympathy makes a man very beautiful from inside. Sending peace always with greetings is interesting. Beneath every hope mind scribbles more. This is an excellent poem very well expressed. Always we should be thankful to persons who help us and we should be thankful to merciful God for bringing such opportunity.....10/10 (Report) Reply

    Sylvia Frances Chan Sylvia Frances Chan (2/9/2017 12:38:00 AM)

    Thank you so much, Pintu. You are always kindest in your comments.

    Sylvia Frances Chan Sylvia Frances Chan (2/9/2017 12:37:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Pintu. Thank you.I have read this comment too on Facebook, haha you did like I did with your poem about Sarsara, very nice and kind of you.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, October 9, 2017

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