Tuesday, November 3, 2009

For When You Are The One In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through winters cold when lands are stark
The flowers shall always bloom,
And sunshine light each rainy day
To lift the hand of gloom,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 15 November 2009

What a smashing poem Andrew, I love the two ending lines on each verse, the flow is wonderful. Again you have written an inspiring piece. Again I'm delighted to have read this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'The daffodils shall never wilt And birds forever sing, The clouds shall lift above you And the songs shall fill the air' Rachel Ann Butler

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A beautiful lyrical poem weaving glorious nature throughout the piece. The joy bursts through and you have crafted another stunning poem. 10 love Karin

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Ramesh T A 03 November 2009

Flowers bloom and birds sing as clouds fall as rain and rivers run to ocean and roll on to shore because they are all bound by love of gravity eternal! True! Nice to read your poem!

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