Karima Puzon

Rookie - 0 Points (September 18,1991 / Philippines)

Forbidden Love - Poem by Karima Puzon

Why loving so much
Is such a wrong thing to do...
Here I am loving you with all my heart
But your heart is taken by another

Such a chaos am feeling inside
Knowing that loving you can create a war
How I wish I could say good bye
To you whom I love

But you are there always
Making me feel so alive
Saying that you love me..
Alas, this is just a wrong feeling to me

Tears just start to fall
When I know this can never be...
This emotion
Is destroying my confused mind
My confused heart

I don't know what to do
I don't know what to say..
Knowing that you love me
Yet, you love that person as much as me

This feeling can never come out...
I am here denying what I feel for you...
Trying to runaway
Throwing away this emotions

While you were there
Chasing after me...
Trying to love me..
Holding my breath
Squeezing me so tight
You won't let go...

But this just can't be..
Knowing that this Love
Could lead to nothing

A love that is not meant to be
A love that is forbidden


Comments about Forbidden Love by Karima Puzon

  • Reyvrex Questor Reyes (9/14/2012 1:40:00 AM)

    This is too heart-breaking for me. Too sad. (Report)Reply

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  • Jessel Jane Tevar Toring (9/13/2012 7:42:00 AM)

    i know how you feel.. a friend of mine, Gani Leano in poemhunter once wrote a sonnet for me entitiled Sweet Adieu, i hope you will read it, the last lines are in time I will end this chase, in time you will be replaced (Report)Reply

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  • (9/7/2009 3:08:00 AM)

    Why is it forbidden? Is this just like the usual love story, when the girl is the earth and the boy is heaven. I mean rich vs. poor sons and daughters? Or is it a political quagmire? There is no such thing as forbidden love, I rather believe this: Love conquers all! That is if you insist.Well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Is It Poetry James Mclain (4/6/2009 4:03:00 AM)

    There is no such thing as forbidden love..lol
    just love forbidden by another
    whom wishes you ought..
    If it grows to the light
    it is right...thank you..iip
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  • (12/18/2008 6:34:00 PM)

    oh yes like Saint Cynosure says 'its the forbidden fruit that always taste the best.' this is very good. good job.
    Crystal
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  • Melvin Banggollay (11/27/2008 8:43:00 PM)

    Well, what is forbidden is more satisfying actually.thanks, melvin (Report)Reply

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  • (11/5/2008 4:21:00 AM)

    hmmmmm.....dear iam sure you will find the answe someday......good write (Report)Reply

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  • (10/31/2008 10:44:00 PM)

    emotions expressed so artfully,
    +++10 regards anju
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  • Melvin Banggollay (10/26/2008 8:17:00 PM)

    Great poem sister but be careful if ever you have this kind of love in your heart. Love is poisonous and dangerous sometimes. It can confuse the mind and create crisis of judgement. Well, love for me is

    L-iving for someone
    O-ffering endless passion
    V-alueing each others emotions
    E-nduring pains to keep love alive.

    thanks,

    melvin
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  • (10/22/2008 6:02:00 AM)

    Young as you are, may be lured to false love. Infatuation may be mistaken as love when the other person persist to make you believe its love to be with him. But it is right for him to say he loves you and the other girl? Do not be fooled by mere words of a man, what guarantee can he assures you he will stand for you when there is another on the other side. Who knows he may have promised the same things to the other girl. For me, its easy to say 'I love You' to a woman but hard to keep when there are many standing by. Good poem by a girl in love! A 10. (Report)Reply

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  • Miriam Maia Padua (10/18/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    hi..i do really like your poem..created with much love and emotions..my friends usually says...heart is a free bird....if this is really happening...no one to be blame..we just control our heart...it will keep on beating....feeling love for someone we truly love.....we only love once...and sad to say..sometimes it happens in the wrong time... for your piece...a 10 for you... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/18/2008 4:03:00 AM)

    Karima, love does not always make sense or follow set rules, but whats forbiddden is also so inviting.... Andrew 10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 18, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 1, 2011


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