Forever Free Poem by Carol Nichols
Forever Free
On a salty night
with an evanescent mist
Floats a girl with steel blue eyes
that say more than her lips
Jaded by the surface
Destined for the deep
She's married to the ocean
to be forever free
Discovered/ read you for the first time today. In Forever Free, is the subject a mermaid? Is it a woman who is committing suicide by drowning? (or am I trying too hard here! ?) In any case, excellent writing!
I like to leave the reader guessing! Thank you so much for reading and I really appreciate the comments!
married to the ocean to be ever free...... wonderful portrayal of the inner need for freedom and love. thank you dear poetess
Love will not change, Me, love it has. Year after year, Year's have gone by. Even after, death touches my face. Love will live on, even After I'm gone.
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To be free! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.