Forever Last Poem by Some Girl

Forever Last

Rating: 4.0


on a moonlit night
the wind blows cold
i am thinking of you ~
i have nothing to hold

together we would walk
hand in hand
beneath our feet
lay the golden sand

my thoughts begin to wander
as the wind blows past
still amazed ~ i'm wondering
if this feeling will last

things i should have said
things i left undone
is it fair to want
us together as one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 August 2014

A lovely poem with a very nice caption. The lines touch as they are read. Very vivid description of feelings. Well done!

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Paul R. Wilson 23 August 2013

Very visual. I can picture it as well as feel it ;)

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The strong connection of love, has such a strong pull! Lovely poem to read! ; D

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