My Emotions Poem by Some Girl

My Emotions

Rating: 4.0

I read it the first time
and feel what you feel.
I forget this though
how unreal.

I read it again
to see your mood changed.
I forget though
my emotions are rearranged.

Again I dive in
and open my mind.
To feel your emotions
or are they mine.

The last time I read it
to never look again.
I finally see the words
and now I understand.

It takes me a while
when I read what you wrote.
Yes, it takes several times
and then its up in smoke.

It's now moved on
in a forgotten recess.
Until it's awakened
by loneliness.

Sekharan Pookkat 01 October 2013

better you read better you think bitter you like better you read

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Paul R. Wilson 24 August 2013

Something we can all relate to. Thank you, Some Girl ;)

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 August 2013

A nice poem that attracted me.

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Lucifera Santez 19 August 2013

it takes me a while when i read what you wrote yes, it takes several times and then its up in smoke. such words full of emotions. i loved it. please read some of mine. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2013

It's a wonderful poem. Swing of emotions interpret things differently at different times.

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