Friday, May 13, 2016

Forever Love Comments

Rating: 4.3

When you are not here, but somehow still, I feel your touch
Six thousand miles apart, and still its you I miss so much
Stolen moments, a love affair we share
In dreams of you each night, into empty space I stare
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Alex Cairnie
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Bernard Snyder 15 May 2016

And there you have it! One of the greatest poems I've heard in awhile! Congrats!

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Sandra Feldman 15 May 2016

Love-Ly So well written, attractive, And like champagne, Bubbly

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James Gibbons 15 May 2016

Hello Alex; you've got me convinced; this is a for real love poem by someone who's experienced love and can write of love's joy. good job Jim Gibbons

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 May 2016

Heartiest Congrats on the Poem Of The Day as also for composing such a beautiful love poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

I feel your touch! ! Into empty space i share. Nice piece of work.

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Tom Billsborough 13 May 2016

A well written piece and pleasing on the ear. Good start, Alex Tom Billsborough

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