akram saqib

Freshman - 739 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

Fort Of Sand - Poem by akram saqib

What will happen?
In this blind den
What is the end?
Of this new trend

When my future
I think about
I fall a prey
To dubious doubt
I feel this world
A brittle land

That is fort
Constructed with sand


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  • Sadiqullah Khan (3/21/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    Great write, meaningful.10 (Report)Reply

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  • (3/18/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    Superb, simple theme and deep lines
    very nice
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  • (3/10/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    Brief write but worth reading! Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/10/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    Brief write but worth reading! Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2009



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