Free Poem by cody byrne

cody byrne

owensboro kentucky

Free

Rating: 5.0


FREE

As it is I sleep
In a nightmare within a nightmare

I dream deep
In a slumber unawakened

Set me free
The chains remain unseen

Set me free
I feel myself dying

Light up the world
Break the chains
Let me out
I will not be tamed

Your what I need
Your what I have
I remain unseen

Break away
Let me go

Ill die of starvation
Or of sufication

The chains are tight
The time is right
Im not alone

Save me
Let me go

Im made to fly
im going to die
I wont lie

I need you
I need you
I need you

Hell is my destination
I live for your glorification
Set me free o father
Let me come to you
Let me run to you

Break the chains and
I
Am
Free

Now I go to thee
Children to set them
Free

By cody r. byrne

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 29 September 2008

Yes Cody! Your language simple, yet carries great meaning and aptly expressed...very good style and structuring of the poem...

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C T Heart 07 January 2009

So expressive and very good imagery used...Great with two liner verses in each stanza. poetically refined.10+++

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Crystal Torres 28 December 2008

i liked your poem and i like what it expressed... it left me with so many unanswered questions idk if it was supposed to do that but it was good

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Ashley Ormon 06 October 2008

It's cool how you used a small amout of words to express a big topic such as freedom. Also in your poems one line always seems to stand out to me. I like the line '...I was meant to fly...' and later how you commented your chained. Reminds me of the world. Everyone has a gift and is meant to succeed, its just up to us first before doing that to free ourselves from its chains.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 04 October 2008

Freedom is golden. Nice poem. Keep it up

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Annie Girl 29 September 2008

yes freedom is what we need. nice form of words love it

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cody byrne

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