Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Freed My Soul - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Elevate my soul upwards, to the heavenly light
So I can breathe in it, bathe in it.
For I am so exhausted of being hidden
Inside this earthly dreadful darkness,
Strangling me like a satanic python
Whispering death in my ears.

It’s not that I want to be immortal
Only I want to die in the light of your love
As I had taken birth, years ago,
Knowing nothing but you,
Carrying a light of innocence.

Now, I beg your forgiveness,
For I have lost it in the forest of black leaves,
For I have drenched my soul
In the murky water of worldly contentment.
And I am ready to believe,
This body is too rotten to reach for you.
And I am ready to leave,
Illusion of decadence
That has always been an obstacle to touch you.

So save me my lord,
Freed my soul,
And elevate it upwards, to the heavenly light.

Topic(s) of this poem: god


Comments about Freed My Soul by Sanjukta Nag

  • Liza Sudina (9/23/2015 10:09:00 AM)


    You are so young! 23 - and:
    As I had taken birth, years ago,

    brilliant poem! your desire of Light is very close to my feelings! Thanks a lot!
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/10/2015 3:14:00 AM)


    The truth is the key about life; and, we have to uplift our respective minds towards righteous works to free our sousl. Nice work (Report) Reply

  • (9/4/2015 9:17:00 PM)


    True self sense,
    sure well all.
    yet,
    the becoming remember,
    the in spite of,
    not,
    because of.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/4/2015 4:46:00 PM)


    So save me my lord,
    Freed my soul,
    And elevate it upwards, to the heavenly light..........Yes, God may free our soul. So nicely penned and presented. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. .....10
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  • Jaishree Nair (9/4/2015 10:04:00 AM)


    Waiting for salvation .Eager to free the soul ,fed with the materialistic world.Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (9/4/2015 8:24:00 AM)


    The prayer is from heart and He is going to listen for sure. Rich with vocabulary the lines flow smooth.Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/4/2015 4:18:00 AM)


    It's not that I want to be immortal,
    Only I want to die in the light of your love

    So save me my Lord,
    And elevate, to the heavenly light.

    A voice of the conscience, well heard and inscribed in the heart
    Loved reading the poem,
    Added to my poem list
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 4, 2015



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