Freed My Soul Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Freed My Soul

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Elevate my soul upwards, to the heavenly light
So I can breathe in it, bathe in it.
For I am so exhausted of being hidden
Inside this earthly dreadful darkness,
Strangling me like a satanic python
Whispering death in my ears.

It’s not that I want to be immortal
Only I want to die in the light of your love
As I had taken birth, years ago,
Knowing nothing but you,
Carrying a light of innocence.

Now, I beg your forgiveness,
For I have lost it in the forest of black leaves,
For I have drenched my soul
In the murky water of worldly contentment.
And I am ready to believe,
This body is too rotten to reach for you.
And I am ready to leave,
Illusion of decadence
That has always been an obstacle to touch you.

So save me my lord,
Freed my soul,
And elevate it upwards, to the heavenly light.

Friday, September 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 04 September 2015

It's not that I want to be immortal, Only I want to die in the light of your love So save me my Lord, And elevate, to the heavenly light. A voice of the conscience, well heard and inscribed in the heart Loved reading the poem, Added to my poem list

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 September 2015

The prayer is from heart and He is going to listen for sure. Rich with vocabulary the lines flow smooth.Enjoyed.

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Liza Sudina 23 September 2015

You are so young! 23 - and: As I had taken birth, years ago, brilliant poem! your desire of Light is very close to my feelings! Thanks a lot!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2015

The truth is the key about life; and, we have to uplift our respective minds towards righteous works to free our sousl. Nice work

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G. Kane 04 September 2015

True self sense, sure well all. yet, the becoming remember, the in spite of, not, because of.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2015

So save me my lord, Freed my soul, And elevate it upwards, to the heavenly light..........Yes, God may free our soul. So nicely penned and presented. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. .....10

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Jaishree Nair 04 September 2015

Waiting for salvation .Eager to free the soul ,fed with the materialistic world.Thanks for sharing

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