Freedom, A Mirage Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Freedom, A Mirage



In freedom if I search for freedom's fruits—
Sweet or sour— there's freedom nor free spirit,
And fear there's of getting caught in deep roots,
A song sings off tune, off pitch, out of beat.
And the freedom fought for oft won't be won,
For, ensconced in a prison's cosy wall,
One might feel, blest he's hallowed by heaven,
Yon of all struggles and strife, gore and gall,
For, freedom is free choice— if a free fall,
Whilst warm, safe and benign may feel bondage,
It's strange but man feels safe oft in a cage,
And prison need be not of a brick wall.
Mirage is it— like blank space not yet walled,
Ask a poet long on his last line stalled.
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Freedom goes with free choice and often one feels it is nigh but mirage. Often there is safety in a cage, and cosy feel prison's walls. Prose may seem to provide a lot of freedom, not poetry. Yet, a kind of verdant imagination possible in poetry is not there in prose. Further, blank space is freedom for a poet, so is an unstructured poem. But it is an open space not yet walled. Yes, he has a free choice insofar as imagination goes.
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Sonnets | 03.06.18 |

Thursday, January 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 03 January 2019

Good sonnet. We like freedom but but not the risk it often poses. Living in safe environment with freedom to do what we want doesn't always sits. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for a new year. Also thank you very much for visiting my page and for your comment.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 January 2019

Thank you Savita Tyagi, as a discerning poet your views are always welcome, and feel free to point out if there is something amiss. Constructive criticism is fine with me because that is the way to improve.

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