Thursday, November 19, 2020

Freezing Cold

Rating: 3.7
I too will freeze
be frozen
like snowy trees
you leave all
on the far banks
of the river alone
all wish to go along with you
like a sculptured stone

where's the mirror of thine
where in I can find
a face like mine

You are proficient poets
now all know
leaving most of us
along the river banks
on the opposite side to flow

none can without your help survive
it's no surmise
'tis the loser's enterprise
you swim back and do them surprise
me poet yeps poet
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,coldness,poet,poetess,poetic expression
It's getting cold here again
Winter has gone
to hibernate
Valsa George 24 November 2020
Everyone has begun to experience the onslaught of winter and in some places it is already freezing cold! Well composed!
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Varsha M 21 November 2020
You wrote this poem before with few changes in word present again in a new form. Very creative. Nice to see both versions.
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Mahtab Bangalee 20 November 2020
where's the mirror of thine where in I can find a face like mine/// am a mirror where a reflection of inter-soul! - self existence being disappeared!
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Varsha M 19 November 2020
You have very well described the freezing cold along the riverside. I liked in fact your conceptualization of a successful person as reaching heights like river water leaving the banks behind but then she swims back to bank to make it revive. I'll see if some idea comes out of this imagination. Admirations.
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Akhtar Jawad 19 November 2020
Ups and downs come in the life with the changing weathers. Springs are ahead of a cold weather. A philosophic thought so nicely changed in a wonderful poem.
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