Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,587 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

From Back - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

From back

You got to be on alert
Else someone may try to subvert
Even deliver the blow from back
And warn you about his power pack

If you want to be successful
And remain cheerful
There is scope for everything
Only you need to follow something

Some black sheep you may find
They may pretend to be very kind
Come close with intention of showing trust
You should take care first before they insist

You need to move with eyes open
Take stock of situation even
Nothing shall be anticipated in advance
As life msut be taken as pure chance

They may try to befool
With whatever possible tool
As they have mastered an art of deception
With each delivered stoke of caution

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2015 7:56:00 PM)


    Gracia Gernale AsianPoet Thank you Hadmukh for your nice collaboration
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 9:19:00 AM)


    welcome Kanusing Solanki,
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 9:19:00 AM)


    wlcome aasha sharma n nelia leagnod
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 9:17:00 AM)


    welcome Aagam Vora, Aasha Sharma and Nella Loagnod like this.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/5/2015 6:36:00 AM)


    Needing to move on to make eyes open is very amazing definitely. This poem is fantastically composed and shared here. Wise sharing done.10 (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/5/2015 6:33:00 AM)


    You need to move with eyes open
    Take stock of situation even
    Nothing shall be anticipated in advance
    As life msut be taken as pure chance- -nice lines, thanks for sharing
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 5:54:00 AM)


    They may try to be fool
    With whatever possible tool
    As they have mastered an art of deception
    With each delivered stroke of caution
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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