Neela Nath Das

.........Funny Song......... - Poem by Neela Nath Das

If you meet me.
You won't love dear,
I have a stick,
which may arise fear.
I'm at the threshold
where B.P remains high.
for untimely excitement,
anytime I may die.
Your blood is young,
Your heart is fresh,
if you touch me
you will make a mess.
My body is tattered,
full of patchwork.
Love has jumped out,
from my old old bark.
Don't meet me,
Don't say word amorous,
At this point of life,
this is sheer farce!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

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Comments about .........Funny Song......... by Neela Nath Das

  • Captain Herbert Poetry (4/27/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    Very inspiring and interesting to read (Report) Reply

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  • (4/24/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    what a lovely write, enjoyed a lot.

    please come and read my poems and gve me your veiws
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  • Sekharan Pookkat (4/23/2014 8:52:00 AM)

    Your body may be old
    but your thoughts are young and inspiring
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  • Neela Nath Das (4/21/2014 4:55:00 AM)

    Thomas, thanks for picking up the humor of this write! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/19/2014 9:17:00 PM)

    Ha ha F.B.Thanks for your advice! Amazing prompt poem from a promising poet's pen. (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (4/19/2014 8:53:00 PM)

    You are a silly young nature watcher
    Drive to the bar,
    get a man
    and be a debaucher!

    Make that tired blood
    turn into brandy,
    might buy you 20 yrs,
    could be real handy!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 19, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 19, 2014

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