Why is it
......that underneath
................................. blue,
The expanse
.......... of which covers
................................ vaults
From east to west
................ of summer
................................... sky,
The like of clouds
......... dare approach
................................... too
Near the sun,
.................... line up
....................... undaunted
And hide
..............its shine
.................... so spitefully?
Either these clouds want centerstage, or a Coppertone tan! lol! Fay....as always, you and your unique poetic architecture looks so good & moves so well....so fluxive! Solid Work, my dear! F j R
When all above, is painted blue, a white fluffy cloud, bids me adieu for in its form, i clearly see, the passing! to eternity a face, a dog, a teddy bear, i see faces everywhere one last look before they depart, this truly is, a work of art
Naughty clouds that bring the rain, gggrrrrr indeed lol, 10 Lynda xx
Enticing title, great shape - your poem captures those blocked-out-sun feelings perfectly. S :)
The skies can evoke so much feeling in people...the grey of sadder days...the clouds that form the shapes of our imagination...the colours of summer blue....bring song to all hearts...a brilliant piece again Fay....well expressed 10+++
bemoan bemoan the clouds! Why the shroud! Wasn't the sun just shining? .... beautiful.... :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
P.S...Wheres the Tiger? ...............................Did i misplace him................. ....................... betweeen the linage....................... ...................................of your................................ ..............................poem? or is this an A N G R Y...F A Y...FROM THE U.K.? ! fJr