Give And Take Poem by Elizabeth Grace

Give And Take



This is all I have left to give you.
The truth, hanging on a silver string.

I gave you all I had,
all I was,
all I ever hoped to be.
You took it gladly.
You took my heart and
you took my smile.
You took my breath away.
You took my pride.
You left me in the dark,
the darkest moment
with biting words and
bitter feelings.
You took my trust
and left me bleeding.
You took hold of me.
You took my everything.

All I ever took
was it for granted that you
never would.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Angel 19 August 2011

Betrayal is the worst thing that can happen to a human being! ! You have expressed the bitterness beautifully...Keep writting...

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Stefanie Fontker 18 August 2011

Like animals, there are humans so primal that they just take, and take. Such emotional words in this beautifully written poem.

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