Giving! Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Giving!

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Giving!
Slows a devoted heart,
Of one who takes!
And takes without rebuttal.

Giving!
The shirt off one's back...
Can be shredded too many times.
When it is not accepted.
Yet a return of consequences,
Are often gained.

Giving!
How many bites on a hand,
Can one bleeding receive?
Why should one apologize,
For being taken for granted?
Or kicked in the rear,
Because opportunities presented,
Do not please those with few choices.
Those who voice,
With a giving of spoiled demands.

Those who voice,
Ultimatums eventually ignored!
With a giving once explored,
Ceased!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 02 October 2009

giving is a whole diff concept today good write

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Milica Franchi De Luri 02 October 2009

Giving this days is not what it used to be. People have to much of everything........ love the poem..........10

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