vanessa feliciano

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Giving Up, Shuting Down - Poem by vanessa feliciano

Its to much for me
i cant handle your 'Love'
Why do you scream?
Why do you shout?
thats it iv given up
why do you continue to yell?
I will not answer you
Stop screaming
stop shouting
stop hitting
i cant do it i refuse
leave me be
please leave me alone
i dont love you anymore
goahead leave i will not cry
leave me please
leave me goodbye
go walk out my door
i do not love you anymore
i will not continue to walk around
everything is not alright
iv shut down
i cannot win this fight
why do you stay?
why wont you go?
please just leave
leave me alone.


Comments about Giving Up, Shuting Down by vanessa feliciano

  • (12/19/2009 10:39:00 AM)


    i can feel the embedded emotions within your writting (Report) Reply

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  • (12/19/2009 10:39:00 AM)


    i can feel the embedded emotions within your writting (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 2:03:00 AM)


    Sad, but sometimes true. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 16, 2009



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