vanessa feliciano

Rookie - 0 Points (9/11/94 / Charlotte NC)

Hidden - Poem by vanessa feliciano

I am hidden away
Day after day
with no one to find me
and no other way
to escape my darkeness
to escape the fall
that seems terribly enevitable
and unable to stall
i am so frightened of it
utterly terrified
i know its comming for me
this i cannot deny
i cannot run from it
so i choose to hide.
When will it catch me?
when will it see
where i am hidden
because i cannot break free
im sitting here waiting
for the pain to arise
just sitting and waiting
for my upcoming demise
there nothing i can do
im overly fear ridden
nothing more i can do
but sit alone hidden


Comments about Hidden by vanessa feliciano

  • (12/17/2009 2:14:00 AM)


    Sometimes, all you can do is just hide from the reality of your existence. I know I have from time to time. (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/3/2009 8:37:00 AM)


    i agree on mr. joe's comment here. anyway, nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 7:50:00 AM)


    Terrible situation to wait in fear. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2009



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