GLEAMS OF DELIGHT
stance seems to revel by voices whispering
yet eyes meanders into window on world
for gleams of delight what soul yet needs
just as a quest of wave splashes onshore.
breath of breeze ramifies along hasty stream
lest green on leaf resolves vesper evening
may grin of green ramble over sultry meadow
passion when knows the rungs of rainbow
ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon
dune of sands as raveled respires deep
as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough
like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth
who would decipher code for way to heaven?
life when mortal and fragile by earthly living
shadow yet riffles by storm on the milieu
still we need to smile onto last dreg of wine
do we ever know very art of curve by meaning?
heart still aspires to blaze glory of immortality
eternity never lays back to meet chord infinite
as verdure oscillates in between time and space
A nice poem that ebbs and flows... ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon dune of sands as raveled respires deep as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth
The last line is the real stamp of the poem. Life is like this. It is a continuous flow. We have to accept the truth. Well done.
I like the third stanza. Ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon Dune of sands as raveled respires deep, As tide and ebb acho across crest and trough Like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth. A beautiful poem about nature. Have a nice day. B.B.
i finally got a chance to read one of your poems....... gleams of delight...... and i must admit that it is very good and it got me to think. nice read tnx. samantha
Great job! Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture with the stroke of Your words.
your word play paints a vivid image to me. Well done my friend
A vista of colours and breathtaking visuals has just opened up before my eyes when I read this... the last paragraph in particular makes me tearful in a good way. Powerful, yet softly beautiful piece... almost dreamy in some aspects ie. in the use of words to conjure up the images.
You can tell you didnt just slop this poem together. you definitely put a lot of time and thinking into this poem. Great job! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I must say, it is not only a poem on nature... to me... it's a canvas.. :)