Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,407 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***glimpse S Of Love***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

heart needs love to sway for swing by grin
as dream engrosses upon for gleams of love,
yet it riffles for colors to paint art of rainbow
trodden path of joy and sorrow yet oscillates

heart ruffles for luscious glow of ocean
by resurrection into resonance of redness
lest jingle may ramble from mango grove
to etch rhythm in each speckle of blood.

desire covertly slither on lips of kisses
mirth croons in joy to float speechless
as frills of spumes reels across the gloss
quest seems to peek into room of repose

horizon silhouettes in midst of solitude
when silence whispers over rune of hue
passion seems to call on scarlet of gleam
resilience of love opens its door to heaven

sky aspires to obsess with mists of blue.
quest of spumes bespeaks of moonshine
roaring into air to delve truth of endearment
dream riffles in redounding to redemption

love true spruces up wounds by savory balm
as it engraves its ideals in each speckles of tone
blood flows deep in vein enlivening the glimpse
gravity draws gleams to enlighten soul in bliss


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  • (1/25/2010 9:01:00 AM)


    What a lovely poem! You started out with a glimpse of love but took a longer look verses after verse until the last one. a 10++++>>>>>> (Report) Reply

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  • (1/5/2010 8:57:00 PM)


    am yet to come across a poet who can put words together so beautifully, passionately writte and it makes the reader's heart and mind work together. gr8 write. (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2010 8:55:00 PM)


    am yet to come across a poet who can put words together so beautifully, passionate and it makes the reader's brain and the heart work together. gr8 write. (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2010 4:15:00 AM)


    a nice piece.Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (12/30/2009 10:00:00 AM)


    Lovely poem - - and very apt title as the verse is full of love....10 Fay (Report) Reply

  • Melissia Ann Senter (12/26/2009 11:35:00 PM)


    beautiful, and wonderfully exspressed my friend thanks for sharing with me Melissia Ann (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 2:03:00 PM)


    La gala of imageries… fluffs touching soul…brings tranquility in turmoil…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (12/21/2009 8:12:00 AM)


    wonderful cognitive metaphor:
    as dream engrosses upon for gleams of love

    and excellent metaphorical poem, belonging to lyrism
    10++++++++++
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  • (12/21/2009 1:06:00 AM)


    passionated poem, extremly expressed well..

    heart ruffles for luscious glow of ocean
    by resurrection into resonance of redness
    lest jingle may ramble from mango grove
    to etch rhythm in each speckle of blood.

    desire covertly slither on lips of kisses
    mirth croons in joy to float speechless
    as frills of spumes reels across the gloss
    quest seems to peek into room of repose
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  • (12/20/2009 9:48:00 PM)


    desire covertly slither on lips of kisses
    mirth croons in joy to float speechless
    as frills of spumes reels across the gloss
    quest seems to peek into room of repose

    what a sweet stanza of rich poem..love your way of writing..well done 10/10
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  • (12/20/2009 6:57:00 PM)


    great way to express the glimpse of love about someone else you
    its lovely n so beautiful
    fanastic job
    10+++
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  • (12/20/2009 3:46:00 PM)


    Why Dr. Kar I seem to get the feeling you are expressing your love to the one you love in this poem. Very tender and touching. A good write Your friend Lynn A 10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 12:23:00 PM)


    great poem...i enjoyed every word. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/20/2009 10:19:00 AM)


    Love leaps to limitless life and light. Excellently expressed my friend. (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 2:24:00 PM)


    you could write poems for lovers i think you write from your heart thats why this poem is so beautiful 10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 8:55:00 AM)


    horizon silhouettes in midst of solitude
    when silence whispers over rune of hue
    passion seems to call on scarlet of gleam
    resilience of love opens its door to heaven
    ...................................................................
    Very beautifully, subhendu..10...
    Best wishes,
    Tsira
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009



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