Go Back Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Go Back

Rating: 4.9


Go back' ordered emissary of Lord,
when brought to him tied in cord,
'Is this all you are send to perform'
with furious face and very heavy words

Still days left and time not ripe,
many more you to kill and also to wipe,
rape, arsen and loot with heavy foot,
also cold murder with heavy shoot,

You have not spared child and insane,
all pleading for mercy all into vain.
All you did not to earn fame
Creator being I, still name my blame,

You were not afraid and trap you laid,
bad act you perform which never said,
Have you to so suffer for sinful act?
plead you may more not with fact,

I may watch from here,
you may perform there,
will not end life even time run out,
kicks you may get still not you rout,

You may act bad and not feel sad,
rejoice at a fall abuse you recall,
never you think down, you may have fall,
no one will hear and you may so fear

I may come there and will born again,
bless for you all and glory to regain,
take you all in fold, lead to noble path,
No need to dip or take holy bath,

I may be drowned in deep water,
laden with heavy and thorny crown,
nails may pierce body with hot red iron,
people may shout kill and still frown,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalvani Rekha 12 August 2009

god is not happy with person....10

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Indani Narayan 15 August 2009

order with displeasure to a person....10

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Poonam Suthar 18 August 2009

it is anorderby God....10

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Reshma Punjabi 18 August 2009

od sends manback...10

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Darshna Chopra 19 August 2009

orders God through his emissary....10

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Erica Santana 03 May 2010

Your poem was really insighful

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warner treuter 30 April 2010

When you put it that way, as fitly described by you, it was pretty damn-well bad wasn't it? But even then, since then, humanity's inhumanities are still ongoing somewheres sometimes. We can but dream an end.

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warner treuter 30 April 2010

When you put it that way, as fitly described by you, it was pretty damn-well bad wasn't it? But even then, since then, humanity's inhumanities are still ongoing somewheres sometimes. We can but dream an end.

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Jennifer Wilson 01 November 2009

Wow! Amazing work! I love 'Go back ordered emissary of Lord, when brought to him tied in cord'!

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Sangita Rao 13 October 2009

Go back' ordered emissary of Lord, when brought to him tied in cord,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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