Leslie Alexis

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God - Poem by Leslie Alexis

The universe is chaos
Spontaneity is divine
Ask the great enthalpy
Entropy of another kind

All things when left naturally
Move to a state of lower energy
Which left alone equals
To things sorting randomly

Not grouping uniformly
As found in the human body
Not grouping uniformly
As found in the simplest algae

I think it’s an absurdity
To think things just came to be
Just like that – miraculously,
It does not stand rationally

Well, not to me, and I’m wise
So unbelievers, open your eyes,
You are more than just energy,
There’s a God who made you and me

Who realizing his people were lost
Came to earth and died on the cross,
Went to hell and took death’s key
And in doing gave hope to you and me

That on dying our fate won’t be the same
All we need to do is call on his name
Believing in him as creator of all things
Praising him alone as king of all kings.

Copyright © 2009 Leslie Alexis

Comments about God by Leslie Alexis

  • (7/23/2010 5:14:00 AM)

    The religion of the future will be a cosmic religion. It should transcend personal God and avoid dogma and theology. Covering both the natural and the spiritual, it should be based on a religious sense arising from the experience of all things natural and spiritual as a meaningful unity. Buddhism answers this description. If there is any religion that could cope with modern scientific needs it would be Buddhism. (Albert Einstein (Report) Reply

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  • (7/23/2010 5:03:00 AM)

    Louie -Love & Peace- Levy (7/23/2010 4: 59: 00 AM)
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    I doest not adopt a creed
    What say your 'Heart,
    of others whom reflect?

    'God is not he
    God is not she
    God is we'

    'All things that have 'Self' are Godly'

    - Swami
    Universal Temple
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  • (1/8/2010 1:01:00 PM)

    Wonderful line and to my mind this ‘more’ than is Energy [in upper case]…not energy [lower case]

    Thanks Sir for such a presentation
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (12/24/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    a wonderful poem leslie...the uniformity in creation is amazing...i too will not think it just happened...we are not just energy...we have love...at times we become totally hopeless...starting as a believer or a non believer seems alright...but that is not just it...man does have a growth from within which reason cannot find...love can never be defined (Report) Reply

  • Michael Gale (12/16/2009 11:37:00 AM)

    Oh great! Now I'll have to find my dictionary to look up the meaning of these two words(enthalpy Entropy) . Like I did not have enough to do today? (LOL!)
    Great write. This will keep me on my toes, with the dictionary. Who says you don't learn something new, every day? One of your best.

    God bless us all-MJG.
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  • (12/14/2009 7:48:00 PM)

    How did the sun came to be?
    Who makes the air we breathe
    So many ppl are in to magical art
    Come on ppl there is a Super nature force
    beyond man......Open your eyes
    its a war on earth...we are the pawns

    good write Les
    hope they see the light
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  • (12/12/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    awesome poem, you just keep writing and you will be proud of your work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, February 3, 2012

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