God Helps Poem by Akhtar Jawad

God Helps

Rating: 5.0


She was stranded on the green belt,
between two busy roads,
carrying the consequence of love,
in the busy morning hours,
she looked in pain,
and he was not there,
to help her in crossing the road,
pleasure is shared by both,
but pain is only for female,
I was there to drop my granddaughter to school,
I was also stranded on the green belt,
and so was my six years old granddaughter,
the wild traffic near the boundary walls,
of a school was unconcerned.
In the morning hours six wheelers are not allowed,
on Abul Hassan Ispahani Road,
linking super highway with the National Highway of Karachi,
still trucks of sand and gravel were wildly running on a road,
that has so many schools at it,
the currency note having picture of the founder of Pakistan,
is the real power, powerful even more than army and rangers.
I knew my God will help the stranded persons and the animals,
but how and when I didn’t know.
Sudden a car hit another from the rear,
a quarrel started on the road,
the stranded helpless creatures got an opportunity,
to cross the road,
my granddaughter entered the school,
and she went in flower plants with the boundary wall of school,
and I saw she gave birth to two lovely kittens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 13 October 2015

A wonderful write.............................................

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2015

God is Great....Liked your poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, a good description of what happened, A female really faces a lot but God above has His hand on all.....10

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Valsa George 14 October 2015

Yes, God intervenes in times of difficulty. To get stranded somewhere, though not quite grave, is still so tiresome. Quite interesting to read about the role of grandparents in taking the grand children to school which both the groups enjoy despite the hardships!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

pleasure is shared by both, but pain is only for female, ..........of course, it happens. An amusing poem that reveals the true events happened on road nicely penned......10

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

I enjoy writing and reading about the daily occurrences in life. Especially when they are penned as artfully as this. Thanks for sharing, Akhtar

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