Temples are God's prisen
all over the world
As if God lives there
locked by worshipmen
Surely He smiles freely
at everyone everywhere
But look at the mind
of the pitiable man!
Some people think that God lives only in the temples and they can worship Him only there, that's why I've written this poem
that's really nice, come and read my poems ty, and ty for worshiping god
Fantastic starting...one should imprison God in one's heart only...great...thanks
Surely He smiles freely at everyone everywhere Temples are prisons to lock up God. good, i smiled when i read it. in such short verses you talking about a reality. thank you very much
To tell you the truth, you really are a poet and a fine one at that! Your ideas are clear and thought-provoking. I agree with you on the temple thing and being man-made structures believe God would be more prevalent in a simple rustic scene untouched by the ways of the world!
some times why many a times i have felt god is not there in our places of worship in our places of worship or our places of worship we have made them to make god god is our making that was a poem inspired by ours your thougt is very close to mine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree, God is everywhere, but the places of worship can have their own significances. A good write!