Going Mobile. Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Going Mobile.

Rating: 5.0


Just once more
I want to tear down that highway
Let the freedom of the road
Deliver me home

For just one moment
Catch my ghosts unaware
Slip the bonds of this life
Me, myself, alone.

For one last time
With destination nowhere
To a new place, a new start
A place all my own

Once upon a time
The highway called to me
I will find that magic in the night
Rattle them medicine bones

One more time
Beyond the Shaman and the banker
Wherever these wheels take me
Once more the rolling stone

Going Mobile.
Sunday, May 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2018

This is a beautiful poem on freedom and life having touching expression and nice collocation. The theme is nicely pointed out. I appreciate this poem. Thank u for posting.

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Edmund Strolis 04 September 2018

Thank you Kumarmani, how strange it is that sometimes an escape can bring us a new appreciation for those we return to. Now the desire seems to lessen. The same feeling can now be found when feeding the not-so-wild rabbit that I befriended two seasons ago. Be well Kumarmani. Many kind wishes to you and your family.

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 June 2017

LOVE! And open road poem with wide expanses of possibility. For once, going mobile has nothing to do with phones or social media. All alone with the road, hands on the wheel, nothing but possibility in front of you. Nice Edmund!

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Edmund Strolis 09 June 2017

Hey Pam when I wrote that I was feeling boxed in by life. I had to get to that place called acceptance. I slowed down preferring the tortoise to the hare. Slow and easy wins the race but I say more than that what race? There is nothing that gets in our way more than ourselves. We must loosen our grip, breathe deep, exhale..........and simply be.

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Bharati Nayak 17 May 2017

Just once more I want to tear down that highway Let the freedom of the road Deliver me home - - - - - - - - - - - - _______________ One more time Beyond the Shaman and the banker Wherever these wheels take me Once more the rolling stone - - - - -A cry for freedom- - -a desire to be oneself- -A fine poem, thanks for sharing.

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Edmund Strolis 18 May 2017

Thank you so much Bharati in America such places are not so far away but first one must have the desire to travel and be with oneself or a kindred spirit and yet most prefer to be entertained and rarely leave the comfort of technology and their toys. I am never more happy than when I am on an open road and leaving civilization behind.

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Nosheen Irfan 15 May 2017

This certainly infuses the reader with a longing for freedom. A journey of self-discovery is our soul's cry in the midst of the clamor of our fast-paced lives. To be yourself without inhibitions or the fear of societal definitions is very much the call of a poet's heart. I as a fellow poet wish to join you on this wonderful journey. Kudos.10

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Edmund Strolis 18 May 2017

As of late Nosheen I have been distant. I have not returned calls or messages in fact this reply is the first connecting that I have done. Time and again through no fault of their own I tire of the culture. The people and their pettiness. The obligations of life and the predictability of humanity weighs upon me to a degree that I sometimes find unbearable. I am dismayed that people can not see the urgency of the hour, can not realize that their rituals are also their prison. Yes we are fellow poets open to all things beautiful but at a price. We are also open to absurd and the burlesque of insane beings. I am reminded of Hamlet the earth, seems to me a sterile promontory; this most excellent canopy, the air—look you, this brave o'erhanging firmament, this majestical roof fretted with golden fire—why, it appears no other thing to me than a foul and pestilent congregation of vapors. What a piece of work is a man! How noble in reason, how infinite in faculty! In form and moving how express and admirable! In action how like an angel, in apprehension how like a god! The beauty of the world. The paragon of animals. And yet, to me, what is this quintessence of dust? Man delights not me.

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 May 2017

This is a beautiful poem on the journey of life. Beautifully composed it has a nice flow. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Edmund Strolis 18 May 2017

Thank you Anil Kumar Panda your name flows! How wonderful and how wonderful to connect with so many people from so many places beyond the politics of our time. You are very kind!

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