Going Unnatural Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Going Unnatural

Rating: 4.9


Encountering no problem,
If follow straight path,
Life becomes hell,
If nothing goes well,

If you brush well,
No pain in tooth,
No more tooth decay
And no more bad smell,

If you pay attention,
And study well,
Less will be tension,
Good will me mention,

If foundation laid strong,
You will be best among,
Name will be on top,
March no one can stop,

If natural water flow is stopped,
Low area will be submerged,
Surface water logged,
Traffic standstill and vehicles bogged,

If deforestation unchecked,
Land become barren and looks naked,
Forest wealth decline and totally lost,
It may cause havoc with heavy cost,

Adding chemicals in water,
And making rivers polluted,
Nature’s impact diluted,
More problems invited,

Intake of excessive rich food,
Burning of more fire wood,
All leads to harm and more disaster,
All in ignorance if not heeded to master,

Late in bed and not early rising,
System failure more and problem arising,
No evening walk or no light exercise,
Body wears more and result not precise,


Isolation such that you can’t even dream,
Doing for a self great irreparable harm,
No social status and lack welcome warm,

So anything unnatural invites more attention,
Answers you find less and face more questions,
Life not peaceful and face more tension,
Wide will be a gap and no more liaison

It has been a lesson not to go unnatural,
neither will be ethical nor even moral,
failure chances more than great success,
nature will help if have more access

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonu Dhanraj 01 August 2009

If natural water flow is stopped, Low area will be submerged, unnatural work doesnot work or hold...10

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Vinod Karmakar 03 August 2009

Encountering no problem, means problem...10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 05 August 2009

folow correct path and there will be no problem...10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 May 2009

has been a lesson not to go unnatural, neither will be ethical nor even moral, failure chances more than great success, nature will help if have more access.....................be natural.......go green.........wear biodegradable underwear....................lol...................

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Joe Gavin 25 May 2009

'Answers you find less and face more questions' real good man i like it a lot.....

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Subbaraman N V 01 November 2009

Yes; that is bad! Always it is ideal to go with Nature and its commands and dictates! Nature knows its dosage! We shouldl never go unnatural!

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Suwarna Patil 07 August 2009

means lot of problems for us....10

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Kunwar Patel 06 August 2009

means inviting problem...10

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Kamli Kamal 06 August 2009

natural means no problem...10

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Shilpa Maheswari 05 August 2009

meanscreating problems for self...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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