Golden Cap Comments
Golden Cap views from its peak so enchanting
Across the blue waters to Lyme Regis bay,
The fine pearl of Dorset her Cobb and the harbour
Her houses a paint-box of colour this day.
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The phrase ‘houses a color box of paints this day’ is excellent...displays a pair of observing poetic eyes...again the line ‘these riches shall always be mine’ exhibits a nature loving poetic mind...beautiful piece, Andrew...good poetry just flows out of your mind...10+
I love it! I love it! This is superb. It is going to my favourites list right now. A delight to read, perfection at its most perfect. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Simply soaring high to sublimity it seems for you in Nature! Indeed it is a wonderful and simple poem coming from the heart. Nice!
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12/21/2025 8:26:56 AM # 1.0.0
What a gloriously happy poem. I find myself waltzing to your words (I think they're written in anapaestic tetrameter are they not?) . My favorite line would have to be 'Her houses a paint-box of colour this day.' I envy your comfortableness with traditional poetic form, Andrew. It's quite a gift. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥