Sunday, February 3, 2008

Gone But Not Forgotten Comments

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The water meadow by the stream
where I was wont to sit and dream.
Has disappeared, replaced by
much less pleasing to my eye.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 16 July 2010

the wordings here is really from a matured poet whose ink does not run off... his pen could not be broken... nice write!

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Ernestine Northover 04 February 2008

How I agree with you Ivor, we shall end up like Hong Kong, all crushed into high rise buildings with no green to be seen. It is very saddening to think of. Another great write from you. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 03 February 2008

Wonderful write Ivor! I feel the same way as you about developers ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Mary Gordley 03 February 2008

Ivor this was a painful poem to read as I am sure it was to write. On this side of the pond they do much the same building what are termed 'McMansions'. So every trace of open space is replaced by soulless castles with false brick facades.

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Mary Ali 03 February 2008

God Ivor, this is beautiful and so true. They aren't only destroying places that we loved, but pieces of our souls. I really love it. Thx for sharing. 10 from me :) Mary

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