Good Bye My Love Poem by Ancita Michael

Good Bye My Love

Rating: 2.5


Days turned into a week
And weeks into years.
You let my eyes seek,
For your love my dear.

Strange did I feel but yet so comfortable with this deal,
Sitting in two incompatible corners of the world sharing a meal.

Waiting, heart filled with colorful dream and hopeful eye,
Now to think all is wasted and I am firm on saying Goodbye,
Once and forever to the reverie long awaited with a sigh.

Hard for me is to believe
That there is an eerie end
Feeling good about relation relieve
Without a need for anything to be mend

It ain't your mistake nor is it mine
just when together things aren't fine.

Thursday, October 25, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye,sharing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 25 October 2012

Strong stance nicely written in melodious verses Excellent poem

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Lyn Paul 25 October 2012

Great writing Ancita, a story told from beginning to end. Thank you

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Yash Shinde 25 October 2012

very beautifully written describes your condition well.........very well written with great rhyming scheme :)

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