Haiku: The Jewel Poem by Ancita Michael

Haiku: The Jewel



The Silver jewel falls
to the bottomless ocean
from the moon and lost

Saturday, November 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,moon,ocean,silver
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first Haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 09 November 2012

This Haiku is really a jewel.Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Ancita Michael 03 November 2012

@Efe: Thank you for your comment. i have made the changes.

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Efe Benjamin 03 November 2012

hi frnd, nice haiku poem, i luv it, but check d syllables, i tink u're havin 18 or 19, instead of d conventional 17 syllables..odawise its beautyful..

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