Strange emptiness fills my heart,
as finally lost; the charm of the cupids dart.
I knew this all along with fear,
that this fateful day was coming near.
Hate the way i am feeling now,
weak are my knees and head bow.
Everything seems blur with tears,
waiting for these clouds to fade and clear.
Standing in this crowded place,
lost am i and last in the race.
My longing soul needs you here,
to comfort, console with your daze.
In my eyes were you my soulmate,
but time has fliped the love to hate.
The wounds of hatred might remain fresh
and the scars of this love will ever crush.
Now I drown my sorrow in the salty bay,
looking towards the horizon of a new day.
excellent...........bit of imagery....great idea beautiful execution agreat message of hope :)
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I would like to translate this poem
Being let down by someone we truly trusted can be so devasating, but you are very right to dump your sorrows in the salty bay. Most of our big sorrows in the relatively distant past have turned out to be blessings in disguise. So, yes, shed the tears, live through sadness but somewhere deep inside, keep the conviction that the future will be very different. I like this poem very much. Excellent